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Modulation
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I'm sorta new at writing like this and I just wanted to know what others thought and also any advice. This is the intro on my profile as the title indicates. I hope you enjoy this so please comment or comm me.


(I've edited this post adding the next two parts to it that belong to to _Demise_ and _Broken_ . If you have any questions or comments please post them below or comm me. But as I said before I hope you enjoy the story and have a good time)


(Warning: IF YOU GET SQUEAMISH EASILY THEN THIS IS NOT FOR YOU!! CONTAINS VERY GRAPHIC SCENES OF GORE!! ONCE AGAIN IF THIS IS NOT APPEALING TO YOU THEN DON'T READ THIS!!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!



You walk up to the ancient house wary of any noises that you hear. Just as you are about to knock, you notice that the door is ajar. Thinking that no one lives in the old house, you push the door open and are instantly hit with the musky odor that accumulates in older houses. A flash of movement catches your eye as you close the door behind you. Quickly stepping back, you knock over a lamp, making it crash onto the wooden floorboards. To you, the crash sounds like a time bomb going off. You hesitantly freeze, keeping a lookout for movement, expecting something to jump out at you. After a few minutes you catch your breath and look ahead, seeing something glistening in the dusky gloom. You come closer to the odd object, and the smell of rotten meat becomes stronger with each step. When you finally arrive at the glistening lump, you look down at and step back in surprise. What you see couldn't have been what you thought it was. There on the floor was a skull unlike anything you've ever seen. The skull, which still has tufts of fur attached to it, has only one eye and wears a malicious smile. You bend down to look at it a little more closely before it blinks its single eye at you. You let out a startled scream and run back for the door. You realize it's too late as a tall dark skinned figure steps out of the darkness. He is dressed neatly in a complete white suit, and looks almost normal—if you ignore his wicked smile. As the finely dressed man steps into the light you can clearly see the blood splattered all over his suit. You step back, only to feel hot breath on your neck. You dare to turn around, and see the gruesome skull you had screamed at earlier, attached to an equally grotesque body. You cringe in fear as the gentleman pulls out a charred black sword from inside of his suit jacket. He stops within three feet of you and begins to chuckle softly. He stares at you, his piecing red eyes seeming to pierce your very soul. He quickly flicks his wrist, bringing the long sword within an inch of your throat.



"Hello there. It seems that you have invaded my humble home. I’m Modulation and my pet there," the man points to the grotesque creature behind you, "is Demise. I don't care who you are or why you're here, seeing as it won't matter anyway." You gulp in fear as the "gentleman" walks away from you, but you'll never forget his last words as you feel sharp teeth shatter your shoulder blade, "I knew you were here, from the moment you stepped foot in my humble home. I watched you defile it with your screaming, so now you will pay for your actions with your life!" Watching the man disappear, you scream as you feel teeth ripping into your flesh as the horrendous beast eats you alive!

Your eye shoot open only see nothing but darkness. You search your mind to remember where you were last time you were when you was awake. You remember the 'gentleman' in white and his evil chuckle. You try to shake your head and tell yourself that it was just a dream but couldn't as pain shot through your entire body. You look down at your body and see a horrific sight. You see your guts strewn out all over the stone floor, beneath your feet. That was when the pain hit you and you started to remember all of the events that had happened to you recently. You try to scream but you knew that if you did it would only cause yourself more pain. You try to gather your thoughts, when all of a sudden you hear heavy footsteps. Thinking it was the malevolent man Modulation, you try to curl yourself into a ball, ignoring the terrible, making yourself as small as you could get. When the footsteps stop, you dared to look up, only to see the one thing worst than Modulation. his gruesome pet Demise. The beast's single eye glares down at you still wearing the malicious smile that was printed on his muzzle.The monstrous creature was standing on it's hind legs. You could clearly see most of his organs were now gone including his heart. When Demise bent down to look at you, the smell of death reeked from his body in waves! As the beast opens his jaws you can see blood all over his teeth and you whimper in fear. His voice is baritone but rough like sandpaper. "It seems that you're awake. I'm sure you would have died from this initial attack," he laughs a little but to you it sounds like a rumble of thunder, "I'm glad you're alive though. I actually have something to torture for a while, but before I do that I'm going to tell you a little about me". Demise Looks at you for a minute before he stomps a massive foot paw into your fragile exposed gut while twisting it. The pain was so great you couldn't scream, only cough up blood and bile. Demise chuckled evilly at the sight, "As you know my name is Demise and I got my name for many reasons, My master Modulation saved my life which is why I serve him. That was over a hundred years ago when he saved my from those other panjus. He couldn't restore my body to the way it once was and now I'm here. I will protect my master with my life and nothing will stop me. I know you're wondering why the master looks so young after a hundred years and the answer is simple. He discovered eternal youth, but enough about me, it's time to get to work on you." Demise picks up a blood encrusted hacksaw off of the ground and starts to saw off your left arm. Finally the pain became to great and you scream as loud as you can, knowing that no one will ever hear you and that Demise will keep you here for eternity as his personal amusement!

It's been day's since you had fallen into the paws of Demise. Day after day was just as Demise had said, ... torture. At some points you wish that you had died the day you met Modulation instead of having to endure the pain that this cruel beast has put upon you. Today you felt different. You felt.... warm! You never thought that the feeling of warmth would ever touch you again. You open your eyes to find yourself outside. The suns rays warmed you from head to toe. You're glad that you wasn't inside of the cold dark chamber that Demise had kept you in. You carefully turn your head to look around, fully aware of the fresh stitches that are in your neck. There on the fresh green grass you see Demise. For the first time you can actually see him s he was. He looked worse than what you had thought originally. The gruesome beast was sitting on all fours, staring at you with his single green eye. You could see the little bit of muscle that covered his body turning black.You could clearly see inside of his ribcage. It was almost empty except for a black mass beating strongly along with two more that inflated and deflated. It was clear to you that you were looking at his heart and lungs. His remaining black for was mastly gone and and wad clinging to to few parts of his body. A gentle wind blew as Demise walked over towards you with another figure. The figure looked like a black lion except for the fact that he had a pattern of white lines along his body. He wore the same sadistic smile that Demise wore. A tuft of blew away from Demise's body as he approached you with the new comer "I'm surprised you made it this long without killing yourself or at least attempting to. I've ripped you open and has taken out almost all of your vital organs except for your brain of course and put them all back. I've chopped off you arms and legs and had to deal with your pitiful screaming. So I put you back together again. According to Master Modulation your torture session isn't over yet, you still have to deal with the rest of his faithful servants." Demise laughed loudly before stepping aside to let the newcomer speak. The newcomer had eyes so dark that the space around him seemed to get sucked into them. His voice was deep and had a vile sense to it, "My name is Broken and I congratulate you for surviving Demise. Let's hope you survive the next few days with me so you can have some fun with the others." Broken laughed harshly as he pulled out a pair of shackles from the ground. He quickly cuffs you and locks them. The instant the shackles were locked, you felt multiple sharp points piece your skin and right through the bone until you heard metal collide with one another. You let out a scream of pain as you felt the bones in your wrist shatter. Broken only laughed and said welcome to the second stage in hell dear friend, I hope you enjoy your stay!" Broken continues to laugh evilly as he picked you up roughly and carries you to an unknown destination!
Last edited, Apr 7th 2013 @ 5:17 pm
Ambrose
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Aside from being terrifying, it isn't bad. ^^ Gotta ask, are you by any chance on any other petsites? This just sounds a little similar to another story someone I knew used to put on his profile. (Not accusing, just wondering in case we've met before). ^^ If not, it's definitely just coincidence.
Last edited, Apr 6th 2013 @ 5:09 pm
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Modulation
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Thank you very much ^^


And to answer your question: Yes I am on other site but I rarely write on them. I do know a particular user who uses this same formatted style of writing
Teacake
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It is well written, Mod, but you will have to be careful what you post on the forums/pet profiles. It can be considered too gory or inappropriate for a pg petsite, so please try to filter if you can? ^u^
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