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gummiepandas
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Last edited, Apr 19th 2014 @ 1:59 am
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Knighte
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You use too many adjectives.
gummiepandas
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I felt that was a style choice more or less but I see where you're coming from. Being as it is such a short piece without the adjectives I feel it would be lifeless and dull... Unless more action was added but that wasn't the direction I wanted to take the piece. I wanted to emphasize the mood of the piece and the emotional side which I attempted through the use of adjectives. I wanted to have the audience see the other person as I saw them.
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